An area in China has a large air pollution problem and water problem. The area is in a valley, so it stops the wind from blowing out the pollution, and China is getting drier and drier so the water is decreasing fast. So, scientists are planning to make a pipeline that connects the area and lake Baikal.
Points to improve:
*spelling
*proper capitalization and punctuation marks
*word choice
Remember the vocabulary:
dryer - a machine that dries things such as clothes or hair
drier - a person or thing that dries
That's impressive Aaron! Thanks a bunch for sharing your insights regarding the article. Stay smart! :)