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China's water problem

작성자 : arr***   ·   2017-04-12

An area in china has a large air polution problem and water problem. the area is in a valley, so it stops the wind from blowing out the polution. and China is getting dryer and dryer, so the water is decracing fast. So, scientists are planning to make a pipline that connects the area and lake baikal.

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An area in China has a large air pollution problem and water problem. The area is in a valley, so it stops the wind from blowing out the pollution, and China is getting drier and drier so the water is decreasing fast. So, scientists are planning to make a pipeline that connects the area and lake Baikal.


Points to improve:

*spelling

*proper capitalization and punctuation marks

*word choice


Remember the vocabulary:

dryer a machine that dries things such as clothes or hair

drier a person or thing that dries


That's impressive Aaron! Thanks a bunch for sharing your insights regarding the article. Stay smart! :)

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