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작성자 : iam*** · 2017-04-08
I go to park every saturday. There are two parks in our villiage. One is about 300m from my house, and another one is next to my house. So, I usually go to second park. Befor the park existed, it was a parkinglot. But last year, the workers worked at the parkinglot to make it to a park. I use this park very well. and there are always many people in that park. And that park is very big. So, I can ride a bike, play basketball, and run around. so, I am glad that there are a park next to my house.
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I go to a park every Saturday. There are two parks in our village. The first is about300m from my house and the second one isnext to my house. So, I usually go to the second park.Before the park existed, it was a parking lot. But last year,the workers constructed the parking lot into a park.I use this park very well and there are always many people in that park. The park is very big so I can ride a bike, play basketball,and run around. So, I am glad that there are parks next to my house.
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