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작성자 : bos*** · 2017-04-06
I want to invent the thing that named make all.
make all have a 3D printer in there.
It like when someone trash something,
He can type the thing that he want and 3D printer will make it.
If this is work, we will not have a trash in this world.
And it will help to invent, we will have lot.
make all have a 3D printer in there.
It like when someone trash something,
He can type the thing that he want and 3D printer will make it.
If this is work, we will not have a trash in this world.
And it will help to invent, we will have lot.
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I want to invent something that could do the things that we want. I'll call it "make all" It has a 3D printer. When someone can't do something, he can just simply type that and the 3D printer will do it. If this works, we will not have trash anymore and it'll help us to invent a lot.
Please be mindful of the following:
- Capitalization
- Choice of words
- Idea organization
Hi Jack! I was like woahhh! Great idea!!! Just please check on the corrections that I gave you. Happy weekend!