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작성자 : cap***   ·   2017-04-05

The time when I was at cloud nine was when I flew a kite. It was so fun. The memory was only no more then half an hour, but it was one of the best memory ever. First only flying only about 3m or maybe 4m. Then up to 20m. Then higher then the higest tree in the highest spot on the hill. Maybe a little more then 50m or 60m. Also looking at the kite if so fun. the kite taking the crazy wind and going crazy. Like falling in a very fast speed, or going left and then right and then left and then right something like that. Still to fly a kite you need to have couarge. The first couarge you need is of the trees. The second courage is the couarge of pulling the kite back. So this is my homework so see you later.

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The timewhen I was on cloud nine was when I flew a kite. It wasso fun. The memory was only more than half an hour, butit was one of the best memories I ever had. First, I only flew for about 3m to 4m then up to 20m. That was the highest spot of the hill. Maybeit's more than 50mto 60m. Also, looking at the kite was so fun. The kite was taking the crazywind and going crazy. Like falling in a very fast speed, or going left and thenright and then left and then right something like that. Still, to fly a kite you need to have courage.The first courage you need is not to hit the trees.The second courage is the courage of pulling thekite back. So, this is my homework so see you later.

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HelloCaprica! Thank you so much for making your homework and I would like to commendyou for doing a spectacular homework! Congratulations!

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