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The tired day!~^^

작성자 : syw***   ·   2017-04-04

Today was the day I`ve been most tired in the whole 10 years. First, I went to school, but my school teacher said to clean up the classroom. We had to clean the classroom with the broom first, and second we had to claen with the wet tissue. I also did the hard lesson in the school when we did korean class and math class and scinence class. Even when the schoool was done and when I was going to the violin class, I was very sleepy, so when we did the brake time in violin class, I sleeped 10 miniutes. When the violin class was done, I went to the computer class and it was very hard. When all the thing was done and when I went to the home, I did the math homework and it was very hard that my mom was very angry and hit me with the pencil. Today was the most tired day in my life. Now, I will sleep! It is very late!

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Today was the most tired day in my whole 10 years. First, I went to school, and my school teacher said to clean up the classroom. We had to clean the classroom with the broom and we had to clean using wet tissue. I also did the hardest lessons in the school, Korean, Math and Science. Even when the school was done, I need to go to the violin class. I was very sleepy, so during our break time, I slept 10 minutes. When the violin class was done, I went to the computer class and it was very hard. When all the things was done and when I went home, I did my math homework and it was very hard and  my mom was very angry she hit me with the pencil. Today was the most tired day in my life. Now, I will sleep! It is very late!
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