Today, i hurt my finger.
The reason is at my P.E. class, we did [tchoukball]
[tchoukball] is like handball.
So, I did the tchoukball with my friends.
When we pass the ball, I hurt my finger.
But, that time, my finger is not very sick.
At 4th lesson, My finger is started sick.
So, i went school health room.
And i take finger splint.
That is so inconvenience.
But now, i'm take out it.
I see my finger,
Nearby to my nail is black and blue.
But i can go to my taekwondo class.
I wil be going my taekwondo class at 8:00 p.m
And my younger brother is started taekwondo together.
So, i will going with him.
But, that class is so hard.
So, i think that time will be hard time to him.
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sksms dhsmf gkrrydp rkTek.

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Today, I hurt my finger. The reason is in my P.E. class, we did tchoukball.
Tchoukball is like a handball. So I played the tchoukball with my friends. When we pass the ball I hurt my finger. But that time my finger does not hurt. At the 4th lesson, my finger started to get hurt. So, I went to the school health room and I take a finger splint. That is so uncomfortable. But now I took it off. I saw my finger nearby to my nail it is black and blue. But I can go to my taekwondo class. I will be going to my taekwondo class at 8:00 PM. My younger brother and I started taekwondo together. So, I will go with him. But that class is so hard. I think that will be hard time for him.
Password 1( you can unlocked it.it is so easy!)
sksms dhsmf gkrrydp rkTek.

Points to remember:
1. Proper choices of words - we have to choose the right words to present our ideas.
Example: inconvenient - uncomfortable
             sick - hurt

2. Capitalization - Use capitals for proper nouns. In other words, capitalize the names of people, specific places, and things.
Example: Nearby - nearby

3. Past tense - This verb tense is  when the action is simply mentioned and understood to have taken place in the past. The action started and ended sometime in the past but the time may or may not be mentioned.
Example: take - took
             see - saw

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Hello Jack! Thank you for sharing to me that happens to you this day. I hope that your finger is totally fine now. Just be careful next time. And also review the points that I gave to you.