I have a pen.
I have a apple.
Ah!
Apple pen~
I have a pen.
I have a pineapple.
Ah!
Pineapple pen~
Apple pen~
Pineapple pen~
Ah!
Pen-Pineapple-Apple-Pen
I'm a boy.
You're girl.
We are a friends.
They are a group.
English
Math
Science
Korean
Art
Social Studies
P.E.
Computer
is subject
to i learning
There is a tree over there.
If you look at that tree,
I really envy you.
For the tree to survive,
have to fight.
I have to fight, too.
Worse
Social discrimination of society.
Better:
I have a pen.
I have an apple.
Ah!
Apple pen~
I have a pen.
I have a pineapple.
Ah!
Pineapple pen~
Apple pen~
Pineapple pen~
Ah!
Pen-Pineapple-Apple-Pen
I'm a boy.
You're girl.
We are a friends.
They are a group.
English
Math
Science
Korean
Art
Social Studies
P.E.
Computer
are the subjects
I am learning.
There is a tree over there.
If you look at that tree,
I really envy you.
For the tree to survive,
have to fight.
I have to fight, too.
Worse
Social discrimination of society.
Points to remember
1. poem - a piece of writing using beautiful or unusual language arranged in fixed lines that have a particular beat and often rhyme. Poems should be in rhyme.
2. rhyme - that has lines ending in the same sound.
3. indefinite article - the two indefinite articles are a and an. Use a when the next word starts with a consonant, or before words starting in u and eu when they sound like you. Use an when the next word starts with a vowel (a,e,i,o,u) or with a mute h.
Examples:
a boy
a big elephant
an apple
an hour
4. Subject-verb-agreement - refers to the fact that the subject and verb in a sentence must agree in number. In other words, they both must be singular or they both must be plural.
Examples:
These clothes are too small for me
Social Studies, P.E., Computer are the subjects I am learning.
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Hello Jack!
Thank you for sharing to me this poem. I want you to remember that poems are in rhymes. Try to read some English poem and try to observe it. And just keep on making and creating poems and I know that you can perfect it.