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작성자 : jih*** · 2017-04-01
1. My role model is my parent. because they are very kind and friendly and l love them.
so they love me too.
2. If l have mistake,but they not angry and they said "its okay".
3.They are very smart.
so they love me too.
2. If l have mistake,but they not angry and they said "its okay".
3.They are very smart.
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My role model are my parents,( we use "are" because it is plural), instead of using a period (.) to continue a sentence you can also use a comma (,) and if the sentence is ended with a period the word after the period shall be in a capitalized letter, because they are very kind, smart and I love them.
Again,if I have a mistake, they are not angry, they always said to me that, "It's okay".
They are very smart.?(This sentence is correct) :)
Thank you for sharing this to me Jake! I know you
can do better. Good job!