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I made a helicopter with a block
작성자 : iam*** · 2017-04-01
I made a helicopter with a block. It's very big. It's length is over 1m. It took 4 hours to make this. It's propeller can turn, but it's too weak so it can't fly. I have to turn it very fast to make it fly. But I can't turn it that fast.
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I made a helicopter with a block. It's very big. Its length is over 1m.It took 4 hours to make this. Its propeller can turn,but it's too weak so it can't fly. I have to turn it very fast to make it fly but I can't turn it that fast.
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