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Life expectancy
작성자 : arr*** · 2017-03-29
Iife expectancy is an average number of years people are expected to live. Teh longest liveing people is people from south korea, especaly wonan. their expanticy is 90.82. I think it is because of their deiet. they eat more vegetables.
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Life expectancy is an average number of years people are expected to live. The longest living people are the people from South Korea, especially the women, their life expectancy is 90.82. I think it is because of their diet because they eat more vegetables.
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