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No recreating!

작성자 : lov***   ·   2017-03-28

Hello! I think I don't like recreating.
Because mammoth is little dangergous to us, and I think that is also cloning too!
And I just hate clone, so I think it is bad to recreating!
Bye! And have a good day^^

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Hello! I think I don't like recreating.  (correct)
Because mammoth is little dangergous to us, and I think that is also cloning too!
correction: Because mammoth is a little dangerous for us, and I think that is also cloning.

And I just hate clone, so I think it is bad to recreating!
correction: And I hate cloning so, I think that it is bad to recreate.

Bye! Have a good day^^  (correct)

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