The good things are that we could communicate to each other, we could also use a cellphone to write down things like the memo and lastly we could play games.

           The bad things is that we could get addicted to these cellphones, especially smartphones. But However, I still I think there are more good things then bad ones. Now, our technology and cellphones are developing, and also cellphones are developing too. It has changed to folder into a smartphone. And Then, a smart folder was developed too.

          Smart folder is a device that has an ability of a smart and has a ability of a folder thing you use to store files in. Just like smartphones, we have to touch the screen to use it and we have to click the buttons to use the folder. This smart folder looks like a folder. And It also has buttons and also a screen. We could touch the screen to use it and also we could push click the buttons to use this smart folder. And It is like any other smartphone, there is KakaoTalk and also the play store too.

         I think there are pros and cons of having cellphones but if we just use it right, then I think there will be nothing wrong in using about cellphones will disappear.



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Hello, Wanda! I think a MacBook has this smart folder, am I right? By the way, I liked how you did your homework this time as it is long and informative. Keep it up~!