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작성자 : sey*** · 2017-03-28
<Black fox>
Tom is timid and he doesn't like animal and farm
he's parents wii go bike travle.
So he go to he's aunt house during 2months
Tom doesn't like animal but aunt house is farm
He grow in sity but aunt have no TV
Because he is borring
One day he see a black fox
He fall in love for fox
since that day he like animal and not timid
Tom is timid and he doesn't like animal and farm
he's parents wii go bike travle.
So he go to he's aunt house during 2months
Tom doesn't like animal but aunt house is farm
He grow in sity but aunt have no TV
Because he is borring
One day he see a black fox
He fall in love for fox
since that day he like animal and not timid
답변
<The Black fox>
Tom is a timid boy and he doesn't like animals and farms.His parents will go on a travel so he stayed in his aunt's house for 2 months. Tom doesn't like animals but his aunt's house is at the farm. He grows up in the city and aunt's house doesn't have a TV which makes him bored. One day, he saw a black fox. Then, he fell in love with the fox. From that day on, he likes animal and is not timid anymore.
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-subject-verb agreement
That was a lovely story Jelly! Thank you for sharing it with me!