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My grandmother's birthday.
작성자 : iam*** · 2017-03-25
Today is my grandmother's birthday. We went to a restrant with my grandmother, and we came to my house and played their. But soon, it was time to me to go to guitar leasons. So, I go their, and had my guitar leasons.
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Today is mygrandmother's birthday. We went to a restaurant with mygrandmother and came to my house andplayed there. But soon, it was time for me to go to my guitar lessons. I went there, and had my guitar lessons.
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