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작성자 : cap*** · 2017-03-23
The best party I could remember is my cousin's First birthday party, or my freind's birthday party. My cousin's birthday party was big, but there weren't any friends to play. But in the other hand, my friend's birthday party was small, but fun. But still, I had a happy time. And speaking of party I am going to a party tommorow. The present for him is gift voucher. But you can only use it on books, so I woudln't expect him to like very much ^^. So this is my homework so see you later~^^.
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The best party I could remember is my cousin's first birthday party, or my friend'sbirthday party. My cousin's birthday party was big but there weren't anyfriends to play with. On theother hand, my friend's birthday party was small, but it wasfun. But still, I had a happy time and speaking of party I am going to a partytomorrow. My present for him is a gift voucher. You can only use it on booksso I wouldn???t expect him to like it very much ^^. This is my homework so see you later~^^.
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