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작성자 : eli*** · 2017-03-23
I think lovebirds like to sleep.
I am very happiness because my mom is bought my favorite bread.
Long time ago my mom and dad are lovers.
I am very happiness because my mom is bought my favorite bread.
Long time ago my mom and dad are lovers.
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I think lovebirds like to sleep. ✓ correct 
I am very happiness because my momis bought my favorite bread.
correction: I am very happy because my mom bought my favorite bread.
[Explanation: Happiness means the feeling of being happy. e.g: She's brought us so much happiness over the years. ]
Long time ago my mom and dad are lovers. correct
correction: My mom and dad are lovers. ✓
I am very happiness because my mom
correction: I am very happy because my mom bought my favorite bread.
[Explanation: Happiness means the feeling of being happy. e.g: She's brought us so much happiness over the years. ]
correction: My mom and dad are lovers. ✓