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작성자 : kdr*** · 2017-03-22
Our new topic's title is A Heart Of Gold. I think titile of this story is A Heart of Gold because a man named Uictor is really kind and generous character. For example, he gave 612 dollars to sick baby.
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Hi Harold!
Here are the corrections.
Here are the corrections.
Our new topic's title is A Heart Of Gold. I think titile the title of this story is A Heart of Gold because a man named Victor is really kind and generous character. For example, he gave 612 dollars to sick babies.
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Hi, Harold!
You were able to make good explanation for the homework I gave you. Thank you and I hope to see you tonight in our class. I hope to see you again next meeting.
-Teacher Joanna
COMMENT:
Hi, Harold!
You were able to make good explanation for the homework I gave you. Thank you and I hope to see you tonight in our class. I hope to see you again next meeting.
-Teacher Joanna