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Exoplanets
작성자 : arr*** · 2017-03-20
On Febuary 22, NASA announced that they had discovered about 3,500 exoplanets so well. The one I am talking about is called the seven sisters. They are rocky planets, all orbiting the same sun. Scientists beleve that three of the seven sisters have lie existing, but we can't find out because it is 39 light years (39 trillion killometers) away from earth.
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On February 22, NASA announced that they had discovered about 3,500 exoplanets so well. The one I am talking about is called the seven sisters. They are rocky planets, all orbiting the same sun. Scientists believe that three of the seven sisters have life existing, but we can't find out because it is 39 light years (39 trillion kilometers) away from earth.
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