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작성자 : bos*** · 2017-03-21
I want to be an explorer.
because I like to travel, so I think I will good at travel.
And I'm good at running,
because of that, I will be safe in the wild too.
I think travel is so fun.
I can be hurt but I want todo that.
because I like to travel, so I think I will good at travel.
And I'm good at running,
because of that, I will be safe in the wild too.
I think travel is so fun.
I can be hurt but I want todo that.
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I want to be an explorer because I like travelling. I think I'll be good at travelling and I can also run fast, because of that I'll be safe in the wild. I think travelling is so fun. It can be dangerous but I want to do it.
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Hi JACK! Thank you for this. Tell me more about it later in our class. See you in a bit.