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작성자 : eli***   ·   2017-03-19

I want to give watermelon, peach,green apple to my parrot, in Summer.
Because those fruit are shat I like.
So I think my parrot, Summer likes those fruit.

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I want to give (a) watermelon, (a)peach and (a) green apple to my parrot called Summer.

REMINDER:
> We could add the article *a* to refer to the quantity of the fruit that you want to give to your parrot.
> You could use the conjunction *and* to connect additional information for your first sentence.
> You could use the word *called* to refer to the name that you have given to your pet.

Those fruits are what I like e therefore I think my parrot, Summer will like those fruits too.
REMINDER:
> Please, be careful in spelling words such as "what."
> We could also use "therefore" instead of "so." This word means  "for that 
reason".

Hi, Ellie!
Please, take note of  the correction. Thank you for attending the class and sending your homework on time. You did a great job!
-Teacher Joanna

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