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작성자 : bos*** · 2017-03-16
I want to climb mount Everest.
because I think it will be excited.
And it will be great experience to me,
I'll be happy when I on top of the Everest.
but I want to climb all of the hill in Himalaya.
And Everest is the tall mountien all over the world,
I can be dead , but I wanted to climb.
because I think it will be excited.
And it will be great experience to me,
I'll be happy when I on top of the Everest.
but I want to climb all of the hill in Himalaya.
And Everest is the tall mountien all over the world,
I can be dead , but I wanted to climb.
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I want to climb Mount Everest, because I think it will be exciting. And it will be a great experience. I'll be happy If I ever reach the top of it. I also want to climb all the hills in Himalaya. Mt. Everest is the tallest mountain all over the world. It's dangerous but I want to climb it.
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