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Twitter's money
작성자 : arr*** · 2017-03-15
The Twitter app begun 11years ago(2007). Now the Twitter is losing money. at the past, Twitter's worth was 45million dollers. But because of its IPO, Twitter's worth dropped to 16.5 dollers. I think if Twitter loses more money, the company sould be terminated.
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The Twitter app has begun 11years ago (2007). Now, the Twitter is losing money. In the past, Twitter's worth was 45 million dollars. But because of its IPO, Twitter's worth has dropped to 16.5 dollars. I think if Twitter loses more money, the company should be terminated.
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Excellent! Thanks a bunch for sharing your thoughts Aaron! I am glad to know that you have understood the article very well. Keep it up!