I think the sign of fish kill is the sign of pollution. - CORRECT!

The places where these cases happened have the same nature. - I believe you are referring to many places on this part. Also, please take note that whenever we are talking about a place, we use WHERE. Lastly, always start your sentence with a capital letter.

It has shallow water, and place can't be seen directly. Why is this important? It has possibilities that it a was contaminated area.


I don't like White Day much. Why?
My classmates teased me because I said, "I like Gue huen Kim(girl),
because she is kind, truthful, trustworthy, and helpful. Then, my best friend,
Ye Jun Kim, and Gueng Jun Lee, said "OOOh, do you love her? You should give her a chocolate on the 14th of March (White day). And that is the reason I don't like White Day much (very much).
However, White Day is the day when men give chocolate to the girl they like, but, I don't care. I don't care when my friends tease me about it.

Michael, this is, by far, the cutest writing I have read by you. My advise; do not be teased. The more your classmates see that you are annoyed, the more they tease you.

- Teacher Macy