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the vertical forest
작성자 : arr*** · 2017-03-13
Mr. Borei's company made two vertical forests in nanging, china, sweden, and millan, itally. the smaller building is a hotel with a pool, and the taller one contains a musium and a architecher school. It could increace oxygen and reduce CO2.Mr. Borei and his company said that the vertical forest could increace 59 kilograms of oxygen every day and reduce 25tons of CO2 every year. It would be good to buid a vertical forest in our city. But it woud take too much money.
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Mr. Borei's company made two vertical forests in Nanjing, China, Sweden, and Milan, Italy. the smaller building is a hotel with a pool, and the taller one contains a museum and an architecture school. It could increase oxygen and reduce CO2. Mr. Borei and his company said that the vertical forest could increase 59 kilograms of oxygen every day and reduce 25 tons of CO2 every year. It would be good to build a vertical forest in our city. But it would take too much money.
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Wow! That was an amazing homework Aaron! Congratulations for a job well done because you've got everything correctly! I am so proud of you! Keep on improving Aaron!