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작성자 : bos*** · 2017-03-09
I want to travel the world when I grow up.
because I want to see history and place of the world.
I like history.
I want to see New York and London.
New York is in USA and London is in UK.
And I want to go to Japan too.
because I like Robot.
So that was a reason that I want to travel the World When I was grow up.
because I want to see history and place of the world.
I like history.
I want to see New York and London.
New York is in USA and London is in UK.
And I want to go to Japan too.
because I like Robot.
So that was a reason that I want to travel the World When I was grow up.
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I want to travel the world when I grow up, because I want know the history and different places in the world. I like history. I want to see New York and London. New York is in USA and London is in UK. I also want to go to Japan, because I like robots. So, these are the reasons why I want to travel the word when I grow up.
Please be mindful of the following:
- Choice of word
- Conjunction
- Determiner
- Verb tenses
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