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Riding bike with my friends

작성자 : iam***   ·   2017-03-05

I rode my bike to supermarket with my mom and bought some food and carried them to our house by putting them to my bike's basket. But, I wanted to ride my bike more. so, I went to the playground. And there were my friends there. So, we rode our bikes together, and played some games and have fun. But soon, my mother called to come inside and do my homework. But, I want to play with my friends. So, I want to play with my frieds next saturday.

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I rode my bike to the supermarket withmy mom. We bought some food and carried them to ourhouse by putting them in my bike'sbasket. I wanted to ride my bike more so I went to the playground and my friends were there. We rode our bikes together and played somegames and had fun. Soon after, my mothercalled me to come inside and do my homework but I still want to play with my friends so Iwill play with them on Saturday.

 

Points to remember:

  • Proper of Verb Tenses

  • Proper Usage of Punctuations, Articles and Conjunctions

  • Correct Spelling

  • Word Choice / Composition

Hello Jacob! Thank you very much for making yourhomework. I would like to congratulate you for doing a fabulous job on yourhomework! Just keep on learning Jacob! You did a great job!

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