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I can fly.
작성자 : iam*** · 2017-03-01
I can fly. I won flying at school. But I can't fly as well as birds because they are very light and they have very powerful wings. If I am a bird, I would fly farder and longer. But I am happy that I am a person because I can think better than birds, and thinking is better than flying. So, I am glad that I am a person, not a bird. But only 1 animal is better than humans. I thought whole day about it and finally, I found out what it is. It is ***. And I want to be it. But I know I can't be it because I was borned of human.
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I can fly. Iwon flying at school but I can't fly like birds becausethey are very light and they have very powerful wings. If I am a bird, I wouldfly farther and longer. I am happy that I am a personbecause I can think well than birds andthinking is better than flying. So, I am glad that I am a person not a bird. Onlyone animal that isbetter than humans. I thought for the whole dayabout it and finally! I found out what it was. It was ***. I want to be a bird but I know Ican't because I was born as a human.
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