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작성자 : kev***   ·   2017-02-28

WHy no junk food
(1. Health problems
2. Be addicting)
3. less eating healthy foods
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Why Junk Food should be banned?
1. You can have ?Health problems
2.?It can be addicting.
3. It is less eating healthy foods


POINTS TO IMPROVE:

Words Choice

Proper Usage of preposition,conjunction

Fragmented Sentence

Subject Verb Agreement



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