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Meeting my friends

작성자 : iam***   ·   2017-02-26

I met my friends today. I met with my friends, and their parents. They are same class in second and third grade with me. We played hand ball outside, go to park and run, and follow our parents to coffee shop and talked with my friends. I didn't met my friend for long time, we wanted to play more. But our parents didn't alow us, because, it was already seven, and we had to eat dinner. So, we promissed to meet together on next sunday. So, I came to my home and ate my dinner. But after we came back to home, I noticed something! We forgot to talk about what time do we meet! But, my mother saids we can talk about it when school starts again at march. I think I can do that. So, I hope my friends to come to our meeting place, and have a great time!-^O^-

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I met my friends and theirparents today. They are my classmates in secondand third grade. We played hand ball outside, went tothe park, ran, followed ourparents to the coffee shop and talked to my friends. I haven't met my friend for a long time so we wantedto play more but our parents didn't allow us because it was already seven andwe had to eat dinner so we promised to meet together on next Sunday. I came home and ate mydinner but after we came back home, I noticed something! We forgot to talk aboutwhat time we are going to meet! My mother said that we can talk about it when school starts again in March. I think I can do that.So, I am hoping that my friends will come at our meeting place and willhave a great time!-^O^-

 

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