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making paper roses
작성자 : iam*** · 2017-02-18
I made roses with paper today. I want to make basket full of roses. I want to put 10 roses, 7 rose's leaves, 2 rose's branches and 3 of grasses. Making one of the roses takes 30 minutes. So, I can make basket full of roses by 7 hours. I made 2 of roses today. And I will make 4 more of them tomorrow. If I work hard in it, I might finish befor February end!
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I made roses using papers today. I want tomake a basket full of roses. I want to place 10 roses, 7 rose???s leaves, 2 rose's branches and 3 of the grasses. Making one of the roses takes 30 minutes. So, Ican make a basket full of roses by 7 hours. I made 2 ofthe roses today. And I will make 4 more ofthem tomorrow. If I work hard on it, I might it finish before February ends!
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