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작성자 : eli*** · 2017-02-17
l like to read Love school book. lt is a book a book about love, brave and people and person. l don't like princess and prince, because princess and prince story are only beautitul and elegance,but people or person story is fun ,sad, happy and Love school too like that And l like Love school
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l like to read Love school book. lt is a book a book about love, brave and people and person. l don't like princess and prince, because princess and prince story are only beautitul and elegance,but people or person story is fun ,sad, happy and Love school too like that And l like Love school.
CORRECTION:
I like to read Love School book. It is a book about love, bravery, and people. l don't like princesses and princes stories, because princess and prince they only talk about beauty and elegance, but people or a person's story is fun to read. It can make you feel sad and happy. Love School is like that and this is why I like Love School.
Remember:
1. Always remember to type the correct letter using the keyboard.
Example: 1 (number one) and I (Letter I)
2. Remember to capitalize the title of the book.
Example: Love school >> Love School
3. Don't use some words twice in a sentence.
Example: l don't like princess and prince, because princess and prince story are only...
4. Always think of the most appropriate word to use in a sentence.
Example;
a. lt is a book a book about love, brave (bravery) and people and person.
b. prince story are only beautitul (beauty) and elegance,
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