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If animal derserves Christmas present

작성자 : vau***   ·   2017-02-12

On Christmas day, we usually share the presents or in the case of the family, the parents commonly give a gift such as a doll, or toy car. While having a joyfull time on this day, why don't we think and care about the pet animals? As they are also living things that exist in this earth, I reputate that they have a right to be treated friendly by their owners on this holiday. However, in the other aspect, some people might say that the animals don't need to get presents of the reason that the owner take care of them in casual. And, in my opinion, it somehow corresponds to the people's thought,but if the owner gives the present for them, the pet would tend to obey them and it dosen't matter to give a gift like a cloth or hat to prevent cold wind from them. This actually depends on a person's mind if owners want. In conclusion, the pets will be happier if they deserves and share a happy time

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On Christmas day, we usually share the presents or in the case of the a family, the parents commonly give a gift such as a doll or a toy car. While having a joyfull time on this day, why don't we think and care about the pet animals? As they are also living things that exist on this earth, I reputate that they have a right to be treated friendly by their owners on this holiday. However, on the other aspect, some people might say that the animals don't need to get presents of for the reason that the owner take care of them in casual. And, in my opinion, it somehow corresponds to the people's thought,but if the owner gives the present for them, the pet would tend to obey them and it dosen't matter to give a gift like what gift they give whether be it a cloth or hat to prevent them from cold wind from them. This actually depends on a person's mind if owners want it. In conclusion, the pets will be happier if they deserves and share a happy time with their loving master.

 

I agree. Animals have feelings too. It's about time we share the love with them, pets, and avoid cruelty. Spread love! - Teacher Nica

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