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작성자 : iam*** · 2017-02-09
Our winter vacation ended. So, I have to go back to school from today to next tuesday. And we'll have spring vacation. And, finally, fifth grade begins!
We recieved fifth grade books today, and we tell about our winter vacation, and present it to all the students. It was good to meet our friends again. But it is bad to not sleep much in house. but after few days, we'll have spring vacation to play and prepare fifth grade. So, I can relax again for few school days.
We recieved fifth grade books today, and we tell about our winter vacation, and present it to all the students. It was good to meet our friends again. But it is bad to not sleep much in house. but after few days, we'll have spring vacation to play and prepare fifth grade. So, I can relax again for few school days.
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Our winter vacation ended so Ihave to go back to school from today to next Tuesday.Then we'll have spring vacation and finally, fifth grade begins!
We received fifth gradebooks today, talked about our winter vacation, andpresented it to all the students. It was good to meet our friends again but itis bad because we haven't slept much in house. Afterfew days, we'll have spring vacation to play and prepare forfifth grade so I can relax again for few schooldays.
Points to remember:
ProperCapitalization
Tensesof the Verb
WordChoice
CorrectSpelling
Proper Usage of Punctuations
Hi Jacob! I was very happy that you made your homework. You did an amazing job for it! Keep on learning!
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