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작성자 : eli*** · 2017-02-08
l do home work and good things is learn and review study in the school, and I were biger and taller I will be doctor but l will be doctor, but doctor has many study and Steadily and that time homework will give me some help. And this reason is homework is good thing
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?? l always do my homework? and the advantages of doing homework is you can learn and review what you had learn from the school, and when I grow up I?want to be a ?doctor.I know how hard it?is to be a doctor that is why now that I am still young,I have to make sure that I always do my homework.? And these are the advantages of doing your homework.
Points To Improve:
Words Choice
Proper Usage of Preposition,conjunction and article.
Subject Verb Agreement
Good job for doing your homework Eli
Teacher Megan