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작성자 : eli*** · 2017-02-02
I how avoid sickness: 1. I wash my hand very clean, because we prevention many sickness. And 2. We going bath house and no going cold water. Because I like hot water and cold water is TOO~~~~~~~cold! Yes, this is my sickness avoid method.
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My ways to avoid sickness:
1. I always wash my hands thoroughly. Maintaining my hands clean keeps me away from any sickness.
2. We often go to saunas where we could enjoy both hot and cold water.
These are my ways of taking good care of myself to avoid sickness.
THANK YOU, ELLI! I really enjoy seeing your enthusiasm, your determination and your eagerness to learn. Keep up the good work. Take care and see you next week.
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