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Fun Holiday with my Family

작성자 : ang***   ·   2017-02-02

I visited Seol-ak mountain with my parents and grand parents. We went to Sok- Cho beach. It was very cold so the sand was covered wtih snow. There was a lot of statues. The cute dolphins were my favorite. The wind blew so much the waves were huge. My sister and I were playing near the waves and I accidentally got even closer to the waves so my pants, socks, and shoes were soak and dripping. I went straight to the bathroom and had a nice warm bath. It was exciting and fun. I wish I can go to Seol-ak mountain again.

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I visited Seol-ak mountain with my parents and grandparents. We went to Sok- Cho beach. It was very cold so the sand was covered with snow. There were a lot of statues. The cute dolphins were my favorite. The wind blew so hard that the waves became huge. My sister and I were playing near the waves when I accidentally got even closer to the waves so my pants, socks, and shoes were soaked and water dripped. I went straight to the bathroom and had a nice warm bath. It was exciting and fun. I wish I can go to Seol-ak mountain again.
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