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작성자 : cap***   ·   2017-02-02

I think mankind can be exitinct when a huge natural disaster ouccures. A long time ago the dinasouars ruled the world. But they all died because of a meteorite crashing down to earth. The samething could happen to us to. I know humans are really good at science, and maybe we could survive the thing that the dinosuars didn't. But we can't do anything if something like big as the Jupiter or the sun crash into earth, we can do anything. Let's say that we survived the Jupiter sized meteorite that was crashing down to earth. But when we go up there is no food or water. Nobody will survive expect super heros. But some one will ask me. 'Can't you event food or water?'. Then I will say yes. Then one who ask me will tell me that you can survive with enventing food. Then I will tell him that only a little amount of food can be evented. So nobody can live that much with that little food. So this is the reason I support my idea. And also this is my homework so see you later.

P.S I did right alot. I wish you like it!

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I think mankind can be extinct when a huge natural disaster occurs. Long time ago, the dinosaursruled the world but they all diedbecause of a meteorite which crashed down to earth. The same thingcould happen to us too. I know humans arereally good at Science, and maybe we could survive the thing thatthe dinosaurs didn't. But we can't do anything ifsomething as big as Jupiter or sun crashesinto earth. Let's say that we survived the Jupiter-sized meteorite that crashed down toearth. But when we go up there is no food or water. Nobody will survive except for super heroes.But if someone will ask me, 'Can't you invent food orwater?' I will say yes. Then the one who asked me will tell methat I can survive with inventingfood. I will tell him that I can only invent a littleamount of food and nobody can live longer. So this isthe reason why I support my idea, and also this is myhomework. See you later!

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P.S I did everything right. I wish you'll like it!

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