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작성자 : eli*** · 2017-01-31
I want to go Saipan, because I went Saipan, a 6 year old, but I scared for 스노클링 to Saipan sea.
And I want to Saipan 1 more time,
and here is other reasons.
1. A very beautiful scenery.
2. The beautiful emerald sea.
3. And very good weather to swimming, like not very hot, not very cold = that is Saipan weather.
I want to go Saipan 1 more time!
And I want to Saipan 1 more time,
and here is other reasons.
1. A very beautiful scenery.
2. The beautiful emerald sea.
3. And very good weather to swimming, like not very hot, not very cold = that is Saipan weather.
I want to go Saipan 1 more time!
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CORRECTION:
I want to go to Saipan. I was just 6 years old when I first visited this place and I was so scared back then. Now, I would like to go to this beautiful place one more time. Here are the reasons why:
1. It has a very beautiful scenery.
2. The emerald sea is beautiful.
3. It has a warm weather which is good enough for swimming. It is not cold here unlike other countries.
Those are the reasons why I want to visit Saipan one more time.
THANK YOU, ELLIE!
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