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작성자 : eli*** · 2017-01-26
1. I and my friends going kids cafe I`m comfortable, because I like to play my friends!
2. I was piano school, I don`t put I things I like it, I thinking ‘If my brother is touch I like it! OH, my got!!!! And this time I`m anxious.
2. I was piano school, I don`t put I things I like it, I thinking ‘If my brother is touch I like it! OH, my got!!!! And this time I`m anxious.
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CORRECTION:
1. I feel comfortable when my friends and I go to Kid's cafe. I really like playing with my friends.
2. I get anxious when my brother puts things into my bag I do not like. He would always do this before I go to piano school.
FEEDBACK:
Thank you, ELLIE! I like your examples but I do hope that you will write your composition in a paragraph form without any numbers. Good luck and see you! :)
- TEACHER LIZZY