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making _______!
작성자 : iam*** · 2017-01-24
I made pancake with my mother.
First, we put flour, water, egg and sugar in to a bowl.
Next, we mixed it with spoon to smooth them.
Then, we cooked them with frying pan.
And, finally, we put hunny on them and we can eat!
I made one pancake, and my mother made another pancake. Mine is very ugly, but my mother's was good looking. So, I made many more, but I failed every time. It looks not good. but it taste good my mother.
First, we put flour, water, egg and sugar in to a bowl.
Next, we mixed it with spoon to smooth them.
Then, we cooked them with frying pan.
And, finally, we put hunny on them and we can eat!
I made one pancake, and my mother made another pancake. Mine is very ugly, but my mother's was good looking. So, I made many more, but I failed every time. It looks not good. but it taste good my mother.
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I made apancake with my mother.
First, we put flour, water, egg and sugar into a bowl.
Next, we mix itwith spoon to smoothenthem.
Then, we cook them in a frying pan.
Finally, we put honey and it's ready to serve.
I made one pancake and my mother made another pancake. Mine is very ugly, but mymother's was good looking. So I made many more, but I always fail. It doesn't look good but mymother's pancake tastes very good.
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