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작성자 : eli*** · 2017-01-24
1. I was adult I will be doctor.
2. I whisper to my friends.
3. My school teacher were very angry, she guidance counsellor with bad child or children.
2. I whisper to my friends.
3. My school teacher were very angry, she guidance counsellor with bad child or children.
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CORRECTION:
1. When I grow up and become an adult, I would like to become a doctor.
2. I whispered something to my friends.
3. My school teacher was very angry. She sent the naughty children to the guidance counsellor. (guidance counselor is also accepted.)
THANK YOU, ELI!
Keep up the good work. :)
SEE YOU and TAKE CARE! :)
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