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작성자 : soz***   ·   2017-01-19

First cobra is scarey so I don't like cobra.
Second cobra s dngerus so I don"tlike cobra.
Last think cobr is not good for people.

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First cobra is scary so I don't like it.
Second cobra is dangerous because it has a poinson on their fangs. Last cobra is a wild animal and I
think it's not good for the people to have it as a pet.

Hi Kate I do always appreciate your effort to do your homework. I hope you will write your sentences with a
complete thought.

Be aware of your spelling and fragmented sentence or
incomplete thought.

scarey-scary
dngerus -dangerous

You can use the word "it" in your sentence so if you are going to talk about animals or things so the
word is not repeated many times.

First cobra is scarey so I don't like cobra.
First cobra is scary so I don't like it.

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