I prefer privacy to responsibility because I think
privacy is important
than responsibility. We have  many important matters  in our life to keep it privately and many people
don't like talk about their privacy, so like me.

These are the right time to drink water. First I
drink water when I get up. Second, I drink water
30 minutes before I eat breakfast and I drink water when I am thirsty after doing an exercise

Please be guided of the following grammar enrichment:
1. Be aware of your spelling
inporten-important
Beceaus-because
paople-people

2. Article "a" is use if we are talking about singular.
a many- is incorrect
many- correct

3. Article "an" is use if we are talking about singular

a exercise- is incorrect
an exercise- correct

Hi! Kate if your are going to make a paragraph make sure to complete each sentences of a paragraph. I really
appreciate your effort to do your homework but I hope
make it more beautiful and nice. I know you can make it
very well if you give more time of doing your homework.