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infectious disease

작성자 : eth***   ·   2017-01-11

I think the infectious disease is very dangerous kinds of virus. examples of infectious disease is AI. AI is virus for birds.To prevention the AI, we have to wash hands and do not go to farm that have birds,do not touch dead birds are the ways to prevention the AI.
so infectious disease is dangerous. There were 2reasons.
1reason is infectious disease could spread out to other people.
so we never have to contact with birds.
2reasons is highr risk. because it easily spread out to other people so it is easy to spread it.
I think all sociaty works together.

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    I think the infectious disease is very dangerous kind of virus. Example of an infectious disease is AI. AI is virus for birds. To prevent the AI, we have to wash our hands and do not go to farm that have birds, do not touch dead birds. These are the ways to prevent the AI. So infectious disease is dangerous. There are two reasons. First reason is infectious disease could spread out to other people. So we never have to contact with birds. Second reasons is high risk. because it easily spread out to other people so it is easy to spread it. I think society works together.




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Hi, Ethan! I amazed on putting your ideas on this essay. Keep up the good job! See you on Friday!

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