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작성자 : eli*** · 2017-01-05
2016 this year I'm was so naughty kid but this year i'm not 8 years old!
So in 2017 this year I'm never naughty kid.
2016 last year i did not my homework myself.Then last year my mom was many angry too. and 2017 this year I will do homework myself
So in 2017 this year I'm never naughty kid.
2016 last year i did not my homework myself.Then last year my mom was many angry too. and 2017 this year I will do homework myself
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Last year,2016 this year, i'm I was had been a so very naughty kid. But this year i'm I will not be an 8 years old anymore!
So in 2017, this year, i'm I will never become a naughty kid anymore.
2016, last year, I did not do my homework myself on my own. Then last year my mom was has been many angry lots of times too. And 2017 this year I will do homework by myself.