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작성자 : sui***   ·   2017-01-05

My favourite animal is sea horse.
Sea horse shape is horse shape.
The sea horse eating fingerling.
The sea horse live in the sea.
And the sea horse us very cute.

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My favourite animal is a sea horse. It is shaped like a horse.
It eats fingerlingsIt lives in the sea and it is very cute.


Thank you for always doing your homework, Suin! Wonderful job!

Instead of writing the topic of the paragraph in every sentence, we can use the pronouns (he, she, it, we, they). 

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