- 토크펀 로그인
로그인
회원가입 시 다양한 혜택과 서비스를 이용하실 수 있습니다.
학습방
원어민 일대일 맞춤 회화 수업 토크펀! 영어 정복의 꿈을 이루세요!
영작문첨삭
Homework
작성자 : liz*** · 2017-01-04
-My past times & hobbies
My first past times/hobbies is to read a book.
Because reading a book is bery funny and interesting. And I like to read a book of fantasy.
My secend past times/hobbies is to watch a movie.
Because watching a movies are sometimes they are very funny, sometimes are very sad, and sometimes its very scary.
My last pat times/hobbies is to do a jumprope.
Because when i jump, I feel nice and I feel fresh.
My first past times/hobbies is to read a book.
Because reading a book is bery funny and interesting. And I like to read a book of fantasy.
My secend past times/hobbies is to watch a movie.
Because watching a movies are sometimes they are very funny, sometimes are very sad, and sometimes its very scary.
My last pat times/hobbies is to do a jumprope.
Because when i jump, I feel nice and I feel fresh.
답변
My pastimes and hobbies
My first pastime/ hobby is to read a book because it is very funny and interesting. I like to read fantasy books. My second pastime/hobby is to watch a movie. Movies are sometimes funny, sad and very scary. My last pastime/hobby is to play a jump rope. It is because when I jump, I feel nice and fresh.
Points to remember:
-spelling
-sentence construction
-subject verb agreement
-word choice
Congratulations Lizzy! I am glad to know about your favorite pastimes or hobbies. Thank you for answering your homework! See you in the class!