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Homework for teacher Joanna
작성자 : see*** · 2017-01-03
1. When it's realy rainy and cloudy,
My umbrella often blowns inside-out.
It makes me very annoying.
2. I would love to eat some ice cream on a hot, sunny day.
3. We should wear warm clothes in the cold winter.
Especially on a snowy day.
My umbrella often blowns inside-out.
It makes me very annoying.
2. I would love to eat some ice cream on a hot, sunny day.
3. We should wear warm clothes in the cold winter.
Especially on a snowy day.
답변
1. When it's really rainy and cloudy, my umbrella is often blown inside-out. It makes me very annoyed.
2. I would love to eat some ice cream on a hot, sunny day.
3. We should wear warm clothes in cold weather/winter especially on a snowy day.
REMEMBER
1. Be mindful of the spelling.
2. Be mindful of the proper word to represent your idea.
3. Review the proper usage of articles (the, a, an)
Hi, Yennie!
Thank you for doing and sending me your homework! I hope to see you in the class and let's talk about these sentences. See you!
-Teacher Joanna