At the Math private institute, I do did not do work my homework. Then teacher saw my homework, and he/she got angry. And teacher said,
"Ellie! Why didn`t work do your homework!" And "I`m sorry....."
I said. Then teacher said "Go to the corner, and hold your hand."
And " Okay....." I said.
I`m felt sad.

Hi Ellie!

I really appreciated you, taking time to honestly tell about this detention that you have experienced. I have noticed that you have improved so far, from you first compositions. Just review these areas:

* verb tenses

*redundancy(avoid using the same words in the same or consecutive lines)

* pronoun

*preposition

* articles