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작성자 : def***   ·   2016-12-30

I went to school and school is in vacation.
I like to go to school. but I like vacation.
becuase in vacation, I can play. but I don't
like vacation too. becuase in vacation, I have
to do homework.♬

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I went to school and school is in vacation. 
I like to go to school as well as I like vacation . 
I am on  vacation, so that I can play. However the things that  I don't like having  vacation  because in vacation, is I have
to do homework.??

PLEASE MINDFUL WITH THE FF:
1. choice of word
2. punctuation
3. word order

Hi Ann~ I hope you had a great day!

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